Dear Calvin,
Look, I know English isn't your favorite subject and writing isn't your strong suit, but honestly, you've been a little lackluster. You wait for too long to begin writing, and the difference between your first and final draft is far too little. You never pay attention to passive voice or the tense either. Your writing is logical most of the time, but sometimes your supporting evidence or paragraphs are weak; you should spend more time looking for good evidence. I think you do an ok job with flow and general essay fluidity, but grammar mistakes and poor word choice can sometimes mess that up too. Just work on your writing please.
From,
Calvin
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